Children’s Stories Challenge Thurs 23rd Oct – Mon 27th Oct 2014

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Today I received the trackchanges for the 3 other stories I sent to the Editor. Looks like I have a fair bit to do going through the paragraphs and going through suggested changes. Then to re-edit the stories. This will also include the first story I sent Freddy and The Jets. Its been great in the help with the stories and dialogue and what would be good to keep and why and why to delete some.

Seeing Robert and friends. Robert my husband has been helping with the date plantation 300 trees already planted which adds an anticipated direction in our forward journey. He will be learning new skills especially irrigation which is good. More work on stories on return as will need time going through them. All the best with your ongoing activities.

Children’s Stories Challenge Wed 15th October – Mon 20th 2014

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I will need to look at the story Freddy and The Jets to look at the Trackchanges the Editor has already made and see if any more changes needed. I can then send back to her if I need to. Thinking once going through it I will type the changes in my story and may not have to send back due to being happy with the suggested Trackchanges. Robert here tomorrow, Fri Carer’s lunch and friend’s coming and Robert helping with starting date plantation. So I will be spending some time with him and see friends we don’t get to see much being further away. Next Monday I will be doing some more on my stories awaiting receiving of 3 stories with changes from Editor. Have a great rest of the week and weekend. All the best with whatever you are achieving and courage to keep going. Regards Madonna

Children’s Stories Challenge Tues Oct 14th 2014

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Its great the Editor is going to look through my other 3 stories this Thursday and will take 5 – 7 working days. I am looking forward to what suggestions she has. When I went through my stories with the changes she suggested in the first story she looked at Freddy and The Jets and what to look for in the text, it was not that hard. Hope you are all having a good day. Madonna

Children’s Stories Challenge Mon Oct 13th 2014

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Today I added the trackchanges. The red text and the lines through show the text I want to delete. The 3 stories have been emailed to the Editor today as she has not looked at them yet. The fourth story Freddy and The Jets the Editor has sent me the trackchanges and I will most likely need to send the story with the included changes which is good. I have put the story The Rescue on my blog today to show trackchanges. It only underlined and I would not know how to add text in margin other than what automatically was included. I think it will be ok what I have done. Hope you had a good weekend. We got some good rain here as drought area out here and a lot of Queensland. MadonnaThe Rescue Trackchanges Edit